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Open Poetry #30

Sincerely

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-11-24 12:21 PM

Sincerely

She tells me that she loves me
and I'm not sure if she does.
I mean, can anyone truly love me.
I tell her that I love her and
I know that it's too soon to know.
Still, the feelings in my heart
continue to desire to grow.
If I had to choose between
believing that she loves me
or believing she doesn't, I would
choose that she does love me.
Or, if she doesn't,
surely she wants too.
I want to love her
with all of my heart.
Honestly I do.
Sincerely.

JamesLee
November22
2003

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

1 posted 2003-11-24 03:36 AM

"Or, if she doesn't,
surely she wants too."

lovely write you have here.

I particularly liked this part.

It shows hope with a smile.

enjoyed

I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-11-24 04:59 PM

Thank you Temptress for the nice comments...yes, I hope her words are sincere...James

Masked Intruder

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since 1999-05-23

Posts 1231
Near golden sunsets

3 posted 2003-12-09 08:57 PM

I have found myself in that same situation. Very nice write.

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

4 posted 2003-12-10 12:41 PM

James,
   I just had to read your post before signing off.  You surely have hit home with many here!   Those love words tend to fly off the tongue quickly( before the speed of
sound can catch up to hear what was said!)
I enjoyed your write.
                           Sadelite

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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5 posted 2003-12-10 03:45 AM

I am the one stuck in the "want to" mode

i can understand

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