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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2003-12-06 08:32 AM



Standing sideways
branches touch
when the wind sweeps,
echoing eachother
but detached,until
the big bellied moon
pours beneath them;
in her stream of light,
they are forced
to change faces, as  
they bow in unison,
and honor her, as
she births them in
a shared reflection

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-12-06 08:38 AM


inkedgoddess
Well done, enjoyed.

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-12-06 01:08 PM


what a scene of nature at its best!
Enchantress
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3 posted 2003-12-06 01:09 PM


Fantastic write...much enjoyed this Michele.
Hugs~

~ Let peace begin with me...

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4 posted 2003-12-06 03:23 PM


Oh, how lovely! Much enjoyed. Chris

"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato



    

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5 posted 2003-12-06 07:34 PM






(smiles) Oh Michele, this is precious, sweet friend, we are all branches of the grand tree of life so may we all bud fruit for each other! (angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michele, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

bklynboy
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6 posted 2003-12-30 02:01 PM


Thought provoking and interesting!
garysgirl
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7 posted 2003-12-30 02:04 PM


Michele, I enjoyed this poem.
I've missed you around here.
Hugs  
Ethel

nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2003-12-30 02:54 PM


I second Ethel's words, Michele

*s
M

bklynboy
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9 posted 2003-12-30 09:53 PM


Michele.....nice read. enjoyed!
inkedgoddess
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10 posted 2003-12-30 10:13 PM


thanks all
have a happy new  year

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