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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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What if you’d not said those words That broke my world in two What if you’d had open eyes You’d seen what words could do What if time could reach back To that painful crushing day What if all the damage done Would simply go away? What if I could just forget Let anger leave my heart What if I could just erase The sickening painful part What if I could just reach out And open up the door What if we weren’t strangers anymore? What if time can really heal And love can self-renew What if sadness lessens when A heart commands it to What if just the two of us Can still take wing and fly What if we fall back in love And give it one more try? Life is what you make it |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
I hope the answer to that is the one you are looking for..  Love, Terri~  Well I will go down with this ship And I won't put my hands up and surrender...Dido [This message has been edited by SharaRose (12-06-2003 04:44 AM).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi SharaRose, and thank you! None of us ever really have the answers, they just happen as we live our moments...usually when you least expect it, eh? Enjoyed seeing you here today...~S~ Life is what you make it |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it'd be nice if it worked that way, but it never did for me |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Love is always worth fighting for they say and I believe if ones heart feels a second chance is in order then, by golly, it should be tried! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunnyone, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
what if, indeed... a very heartfelt read... snow "...why does my skeleton pursue me |
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eringobraugh Junior Member
since 2003-12-06
Posts 16Michigan |
I am a huge fan of rhyme, especially rhyme with some depth. It thrills my heart to find a poem that has both. I offer no criticism for there is nothing to be critical of, in this piece. Touching and eloquent - a great read. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi passing shadows, and thank you! No, it doesn't always work that way, and sometimes it seems life is simply one big question, and that's the crux of this write!! ~S~ Hi Noah, and thank you! Yes, I'm with you, in that I believe we are all worthy of 2nd chances, if they arise...~S~ Hi Snow, and thank you! Sometimes we have to ask those questions from our hearts...~S~ Hi eringobraugh, and thank you! What a wonderful reply!! So glad that you enjoyed my efforts here, and it's nice to meet you...~S~ Life is what you make it |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
what if he is wondering the very same what ifs? well, Sunny gal, if it was really good the first time, its probably worth a second chance, if you can both get past that one big hurt |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunny - you always write your feelings well, and come out in your words... BC |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Sunnyone, yes it's worth the fight, to follow your heart because you'll be all the better for it. "What if time can really heal And love can self-renew" You know that this is true for your own self, no matter the outcome... ~K~ |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh Gosh, the "what if's" of life so often we ponder... Your poem touches my heartSweetie but me thinx you know that already... I sometimes wander off into the "what if thinking mode" but suddenly my thoughts are jolted into the "what is", and for me that jolt is what keeps me on track going forward... HeartHugs2u *~coco~* |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What if you hadn't written this for we never know who may have the answers... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Sometimes, we never know the answers... or find ones we don't want... but we have to try, take that chance... We can't go back, but if we're lucky, we can go on. *S* Excellent write! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I thought about those "what if's" once..and I never found the answer... I guess the problem is in the need to ask. hugss M |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
What if's are nice if both hold onto them...James |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
sunnyone, I think there are more whatifs in the world than clouds in a trillion zillion skies! I enjoyed your questions, I think i may have asked them myself at one time... Wishing you fine holidays. |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Sonny Yes there are alot of "what ifs" but hang on and give it all you have from within. You can do it and as long as it comes from your heart, you will succeed. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunny - I hope things are well with you, happy holidays... BC |
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