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Open Poetry #30

Stolen Moments

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

0 posted 2003-12-05 03:09 PM

Stolen Moments
~*~

The fading sun hides in the arms of the trees
my room grows coldly dim
then a tall thin shadow falls before spinning eyes
it's only an approaching dream
and I think you don't belong here
but this is my stolen moment
a certain time
I reserve
for you

BloomingRose

duckysgirl
Junior Member

since 2003-11-19

Posts 26
Down South

1 posted 2003-12-05 03:37 PM

Nicely done...i enjoyed this.

Duckysgirl

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-12-05 03:40 PM

Nice...James

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2003-12-05 04:29 PM

BloomingRose - those stolen moments can be most precious, yes they can...

BC

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-12-05 04:30 PM

Very lovely Deb..has a romantic, haunting feel to it.
Much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~ Let peace begin with me...

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

5 posted 2003-12-14 06:09 PM

wow, what a lucky person
they are! *sighs*, beautiful
write dear.
happy holidays,
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

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