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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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When one man's life is hooked onto others where on independent decisions he did not bother separate choices are smothered by needs to adhere to the decisions of another he'd hold so dear... I'd prefer to get to the source of the game find why the vine clings...let's throw no blame it latches onto the elm that offers moisture that tree's staunch support gives it posture... Yet if that dependent be of minor age there is reason for him not to engage, in adult decisions that he has not incurred in adult ways that he has not yet endured. Some grow up on independent grounds decisions are formed out of bounds where flamboyant lives pour over cup brims or choose to live dependent on alien whims [This message has been edited by ecrivan (12-05-2003 11:52 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Martin, I enjoyed this write very much. Yes, how sweet it is to follow your own star. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
YOU BET as J. Gleason would say.."how sweet it is"..thanks for sharing  |
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C? Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 190 |
this is the type of poem that works the kinks out of brains...reads very smoothly |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I always love your insight and wisdom Martin... |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Maybe, I wrote this to look back on my dependencies...or I might have a keen sense of understanding when and how a person should speak for himself...I think one has to be dependent and realize its uselessness before any solid changes can occur [This message has been edited by ecrivan (12-06-2003 12:02 AM).] |
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