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exhale
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0 posted 2003-12-04 08:59 PM


she had her hair pulled back
can you see the pain
through all that makeup
carefull now
you wouldnt want your mascara to run
you wouldnt want the world to see you
would you?
so vulnerable
she steps into her new shoes
prepared for another day
another torture
carefull now
you wouldnt want the world to see you
would you?...

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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2003-12-04 10:27 PM


Sometimes we do hide behind our mask..not allowing the world to see our pain...

~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

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Near golden sunsets
2 posted 2003-12-08 07:21 PM


Isn't that why you wear makeup...because you want the world to see how 'beautiful' you can be...

Or are you saying that you don't want the world to see the real you, the you behind the makeup...

Very interesting write

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Bad monkey.

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