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Serena Renae
Junior Member

since 2003-12-04

Posts 48
Ohio, USA

0 posted 2003-12-04 07:03 PM

Standing on the mountain side,
Wondering whether I'll climb or fall.
Knowing down's a long hard ride,
And up's too far to crawl.

Searching for a holding place,
Somewhere to catch my breath.
Seeing not even the smallest space,
To hide from emotional death.

Valleys and Mountains lie before me,
I'm standing on shaky ground,
Valleys and Mountains lie before me,
Am I valley or mountain bound?

As I gaze up the sun shines clear,
No clouds to block my sight.
By the rays, your love shines near,
Guiding me with your light.

In you, Ive found my anchor rope,
To ease through the ups and downs.
Loving you restored all hope,
Of a life on solid ground.

Valleys and mountains lie before me,
But I'm standing oh so strong,
Valleys and mountains lie before me,
But the shaky grounds now gone.

The summits now within my reach,
And soft seems the valley floor.
All crags and canyons I now breach,
Till my fear can rule no more.

Valleys and mountains we conquer together,
And my fear can rule no more....

Ada'doLisdo'ti
Member

since 2002-12-10

Posts 123
California

1 posted 2003-12-04 07:08 PM

Very nice write, enjoyed throughly, look forward to more...

The sweetest rose is one you'll die for...

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2003-12-04 07:19 PM

Welcome to Passions I hope you stay a while.
Your poem is very well thought out and deeply written.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2003-12-04 07:26 PM

A beautiful firts post....

Welcome to Passions we are glad you are here...enjoy your time, take a look around, and welcome to our family....

please check your email for a special greeting

Kindly

Greeneyes~

I would rather have one breath of his hair,
one kiss of his mouth,
one touch of his hand
than an eternity without it.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-12-05 12:13 PM

Nice writing...James

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2003-12-05 01:13 AM

Welcome! This is a wonderfully uplifting write, Serena. Hope you'll stick around and share more like this, and have fun reading other poets here in Passions.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2003-12-05 01:15 AM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, know that true love knows no boundaries and together you will conquer every mountain and cross every water together and close in each canyon with its faith and hope, God Bless You, this is a brilliant debut, I love it!Welcome to Passions, sweet Renae, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Renae, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

7 posted 2003-12-05 01:17 AM

Welcome to Passions! A very pleasant read.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2003-12-05 03:47 AM

snapping fingers "sin't no mountain high enough, ain't no valley low enough..."

yes! You got me dancing in my chair with this poem! Awesome rhyme scheme and theme...wonderfully done!

Welcom to Passions

I'm looking forward to more of you!

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

9 posted 2003-12-05 09:17 AM

this was a stunning and very beautiful
first post! welcome to passions, you
definitely will fit in here! I look
forward to reading more of your work.
take care.
Amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2003-12-05 04:58 PM

Very very beautiful entrance post you have gifted us with.
I know you will love it here..I will be reading you!

Relax, take a look around and most of all have fun!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Let peace begin with me...

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

11 posted 2003-12-05 08:54 PM

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

12 posted 2003-12-06 03:05 AM

This is beautiful. What a blessing this is. I'm saving this to my library to read again, and again when I need a lift in spirit.
Thank you for sharing this. Lovely it is.

Love,
Terri~

Well I will go down with this ship
And I won't put my hands up and surrender...Dido

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