Please Don't Break My Heart With Gentle Spirit

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vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2003-12-04 06:26 PM

From the first time that you smiled at me
with twinkling eyes of brilliant blue
I could feel my heart beat stronger
I was warmed in loving hues

Please don't break my heart
you know that I am
In love with you
Try to understand
the way I feel for us
Because I don't want to cry
and have my heart broke this time

Please don't break my heart
No, not a second time

Tell me this is not merely a dream
And that I will not awake
assure me that this love is real
and that my trust you won't forsake

I am willing to take another chance
all I need is a heart that's true
Please, don't break my heart
Baby, I've fallen in love with you

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (12-11-2003 02:05 PM).]

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-12-04 06:27 PM

Very beautiful you two!
Much enjoyed!
~Hugs to you both~

~ Let peace begin with me...

Ada'doLisdo'ti
Member

since 2002-12-10

Posts 123
California

2 posted 2003-12-04 06:34 PM

Very emotionally touching, hits hard, softly.

The sweetest rose is one you'll die for...

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

3 posted 2003-12-04 06:40 PM

Such a quiet plea. Nice one.
Love,
Terri~

Well I will go down with this ship
And I won't put my hands up and surrender...Dido

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-12-05 12:39 PM

So when have the two of you
started writing music?
*smile*

(truly a song, put it to music please)
Nice writing guys
xxoo

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-12-05 03:44 AM

I love this!

You two are great together!

ambrish
Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 257
India

6 posted 2003-12-05 05:32 AM

Iam willing to take another chance
all I need is a heart that's true
Please, don't break my heart
Baby,I've fallen in love with you

bond of love is forever.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2003-12-05 07:00 AM

Very very nicely done, ladies!
This is the best duet yet, Vandana and Donna!
Broken hearts take much longer to mend than broken bones.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2003-12-05 03:29 PM

Outstanding...and they are mild...one of my favorites...James

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

9 posted 2003-12-05 08:41 PM

I understand this all too well!!
Love is a fickle one, and it seems
second chances are far and few between.

Nicely done you two! *applause*

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2003-12-06 08:09 PM

(smiles) Yay! Awwwwwwwww, this is such a wonderfully heartfelt duet, sweet friends, you make such a wonderful poetic team that can express feelings of love and heartache so well together! (big angel group hug) God Bless You Both, sweet friends, we all love you so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Vandana and Donna, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you both!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

11 posted 2003-12-07 10:58 AM

vandana - excellent write. You and Gentle Spirit have done well this day...

BC

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

12 posted 2003-12-09 01:59 PM

What a wonderful collaboration! Well done, the both of you! Let's see you do it again, and soon!

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

13 posted 2003-12-11 08:34 AM

Thanks to everyone. Vandana came up with the idea, all I did was add along and had so much fun doing it. It was a pleasure writing with you Vandana and lets do it again soon.

WannabePoet
Member

since 2003-12-10

Posts 62
New York USA

14 posted 2003-12-11 11:56 AM

Beautifull! Opening your heart to love can be one of the scariest things to do. But if opened to the right one, it is the most awesome thing to do. Thank you for sharing.

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

15 posted 2003-12-15 01:23 PM

Wannabe there is much truth in your words.
Again, my thanks Vandana for the pleasure.
Hugs.

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