Open Poetry #30 |
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just a cliche of the final breath |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought ![]() |
When I take my final breath And slip into the hands of death I know that tears may seize your eyes And it’s ok for you to cry… Though my years were very few They were filled by joys of you And though we have regrets and shame There’s no reason for laying blame. So when you cry, don’t let it last. Live you future, not my past. Besides, we still are not apart… I stay within your very heart. He was a man of sorrows ...I am a girl of tears. [This message has been edited by GG (12-04-2003 02:42 PM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Very good Alyssa. From your heart to your pen.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, you will always be in my heart ![]() |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Hmmmmmm As told from up above ..... To love is just to love. sad but with a great touch on the soul. Smile Jes |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Gentle, Thats the way a poem should be ![]() Jes, and yes to love can be so much more ![]() Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Dix, ![]() Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Alyssa, excellent penning, straight from the heart...you always write it heart and soul, and though this was sad indeed, I saw a shimmer of light in it as well. take care. amy ![]() "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
GG - yes, you do write from the heart... BC |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Aimster, You always reply with kindness, thank you ![]() Bill, that is a huge compliment, to me ![]() Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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