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mytuesdaywishes
Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 254
a voice from the musicbox

0 posted 2003-11-23 08:36 PM

tuesdays used to be ours
we'd sit out on your porch, breathe
or we'd sit up in your room
talking and holding pillows
your bed was the softest place
for our wits to clash
you called me a poet
and i called you everyday
i hugged my boots the day
you ignored me
you told me not to love you
because i would get hurt
but some 3am times
you would tell me you loved me
nighttime was for us
and daytime was for those
who were trying to hold us back
elements of the universe
we called them
and swore
we could beat them
and you used to make me
things in sleepy classes
with colors
that are fading now
i think i miss you most
on tuesdays

joy has its own justice. and dreams are languid and lawless. and everything bows to beauty, when it's fierce and when it's flawless...

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

1 posted 2003-11-23 08:51 PM

sad image but wonderful write

We do away with your kind...I am war I am pain I am all you've ever slein I am tears in your eyes I am truth I am lies. Dimmu Borgir

PseudoPoet
Junior Member

since 2003-11-23

Posts 18

2 posted 2003-11-23 10:01 PM

A very powerful metaphorical piece. Like dried flowers in a book, this is a memory of the present.

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

3 posted 2003-11-23 10:03 PM

Hey. Wow, that was powerful. The things that we associate with the past hurt so much in the present. This was really well done.

~sky

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

4 posted 2003-11-23 10:03 PM

i really like this piece
in every way .

snow

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

5 posted 2003-11-23 10:22 PM

Gentle and good...I like this...but then, I'm a Tuesday kind of guy....

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Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

6 posted 2003-11-24 03:10 AM

beautiful but sad

I have someone I miss like this from a long time ago. Thank you for touching me with your poetry. It feels wonderful.

I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-11-24 03:31 AM

this aches pretty

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

8 posted 2003-11-24 03:58 PM

you called me a poet
and i called you everyday

I like this tender write very much... especially these lines... they capture the mismatch in commitment. *S*

Bonfirelight
Member

since 2003-06-19

Posts 85
London, England

9 posted 2004-01-13 10:13 AM

coool stuff.
i love the mood it sets around me, your memories/my memories its all related.
cheers

McLean
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

10 posted 2004-01-13 10:22 AM

I just love how you wrote this. It's so...so...familiar, I guess. None-the-less, sad. It says to me that you miss most during normal everyday times, like Tuesday. That is the good stuff, isn't it?

Peace to you, McLean

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

11 posted 2004-03-08 06:05 PM

I am falling in love with your words...

it's tuesday here btw.

fatastic.

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

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