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Silent Reverie
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Silent Reverie |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Resounding, these words ~what must be will be~ I feel the power of this silent reverie. It comes to me on winds of song a glowing, a growing steadily stronger. No longer will I hold the pain that once was held there through words, my emotions; my soul I now bare. In spirits seek I hear them speak {in voices of ancient whispers} Such peace is found in tranquil surround {and I wish to touch the sky,} to no longer cry.... Through eyes of green this dreamer dreams {visions painted vividly} mountain views in haze following of ancestral ways, in seeking the journey of self. It's better than I could have planned.. it's made me who I am... {Trace Adkins} [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (12-04-2003 10:56 AM).] |
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Chrissysue Junior Member
since 2003-11-21
Posts 23Nebraska |
I like, very tranquil but with and underlying power pushing you along. Very well done |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
In spirits seek I hear them speak {in voices of ancient whispers} Such peace is found in tranquil surround {and I wish to touch the sky,} to no longer cry.... A wonderful, calming bit of writing, Donna. I just love the words above. Those ancients speak with such wisdom. I wonder if generations from now, people will think of this generation as having any wisdom at all? Keep moving forward dear lady. Hugs, Marti 'You cannot shake hands with a clenched fist.' |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Resounding, these words ~what must be will be~ I feel the power of this silent reverie. It comes to me on winds of song a glowing, a growing steadily stronger." Wonderful words to hear this morn dear lady. And it's SO good to see you growing stronger.  Hugs~ ~ Let peace begin with me... [This message has been edited by Enchantress (12-04-2003 11:08 AM).] |
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Ada'doLisdo'ti Member
since 2002-12-10
Posts 123California |
Beautifully strong and inspiring...enjoyed reading. [This message has been edited by Ada'doLisdo'ti (12-04-2003 11:22 AM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Donna...There is quiet power in your words...a poem of growth, much enjoyed! Hugs! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
such a spiritually lovely write... such healing in your rhymes.... beautiful penning Donna-girl.  When I'm with you my eyes are so wide ... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
the beauty of (your) self thank you for sharing |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Enjoyed this, Particularly the repeating Constructed in the stanzas. Gloom |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Brava! Donna! Your silent reverie is not so silent! I heard it loud and clear! A wonderful write from a wonderful you! You need not seek any further, my friend! The journey may have been difficult, but look what you have discovered! ~ Yourself!!! ~ and you are beautiful soul to behold!  Loving hugs, Linda [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (12-04-2003 03:35 PM).] |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
That was a cool rhyming scheme! I very much enjoy poems dealing with the subject matter of self journies. Enjoyed! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
you always write with such power, yet in a calming and quiet way...you take words and make magic. take care. amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved this  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Gentle Spirit - touch the sky, you can as you are a Gentle Spirit... BC |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit A very good write, enjoyed the read. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There are journeys... and then there are realized wanderings. Both hold so much... both should be taken. Thank you, m'dear, for remembering me. Mom |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Gentle Spirit - nice to read this upbeat writing from your pen... BC |
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