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Against the Sweetest Breeze
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Against the Sweetest Breeze |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Perhaps it's only the wind that greets us? Even as this familiar air hints of something more. Every dawn holds a blade of indifference. One world is cleaved as two. Perhaps only the wind remembers this taste of whole existence? While we just sniff the later dreams that linger. And head towards another day. Our face...against the sweetest breeze. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Exquisite writing Eric! Hugs~ ~ Let peace begin with me... |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Yes, a lot of good thoughts in here.  ~sky Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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cosmic-duality Junior Member
since 2003-11-24
Posts 14 |
I admire your style of keeping it short and very meaningful. this line sticks out to me While we just sniff the later dreams that linger |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
perhaps |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Beautiful, as always, dear Eric!!  Hugs  Ethel |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Dear Eric.... Absolutely incredible as you always are. Thank you...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Great poem. Loved the powerful line: "Every dawn holds a blade of indifference." |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
perhaps this is the sweetest of sweet poems from you... ~ARH |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ericc...You write beautiful! |
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