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LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

0 posted 2003-12-04 07:35 AM

Wide-eyed time bumping into my camaraderie
Head tilted, planking considerations to my right ear
Hardly more substance then a shadow…yet
Moving was anchored, like warm clinging perspiration
In the deepest bedrock of my mind
Nimbus couldn’t be more certain, as Disney increased
Supporting walkways, arm in arm, obviously effluent
As far-reaching faces, seemingly never bored to tears
Great highways lay lifted along side of bubbly rose lighted festooned stairs
Balanced in mid-air, climbing a trellis of heightened perceptions
Ensuring, despondent events seldom appear free with lingering effects
Blinking in bewilderment, looking less like a psychopath
Banshee’s commotion of kindness puts to mind, semi articulate
Engines glancing over fossilized falling debris
Where self-imposed blindness turns down the heat
Eager to commit a substance, fueled by explosive quagmires
Seething flames, reminiscent green mossy fascinations
Oh, the curse of an artist’s eye! How magnificent!
Fascinating visuals cupping mobile energies of blasts
“You moral Casanova you!” suggesting spirited voices coached
Calmed by comedy-clubs, crowding goddesses were muttering
Lost in white prayers, immensely sprawling inner percussion
Encouraging hallucinations, vivid resonating elements, sweet smelling
Reality’s extraordinary experiences unfolding
With a swish of crimson zinfandel
Feathering blinks, a fury of wings, impelled like great tempests
Leaving evidence on my lips and fingertips
Dripping, oozing…a contemporary classic
Like spoors of senses desperate to reroute obstructing passions
With warm baths of humility…electromagnetic
Pointing to my spinal chord, filtrating through my brain
Impulses conveying three-dimensional cartographies interconnecting
Wondrous galaxies of scintillating neurons, swallowing my entire being
Where a flood of doves landed on my lower lip
Clarified shoals of chewing, reducing speeds on future events
Like a van Gogh, hanging in museums
Pearlescent glows swelling my eyes with promise
Irresistible compulsions to move, integrating logical white noise
With every interest group, like a confessional of optimism arrayed
In exotic material

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2003-12-04 08:10 AM

LeeJ,
This strikes me as:
"Impulses conveying three-dimensional cartographies interconnecting"
Almost like a Jackson Polloc.
The best of mornings to ya.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-12-04 08:19 AM

Lee, your writing is very intersting. It's
like you really are painting the whole scene
before your reader's eye.

Hugs

Ethel

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