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The Letter |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The letter I sighed each word upon the page To wage a way upon the stage To greet you in the mornings dew To meet you in a phantoms coup To snip the skins that holds us tight To slip away into the night Greet you by an Eden’s stream Fill the pleasures of a dream Offer you a snow-white dove Held upon a velvet glove Give to you my love in rhyme Endeavor in forever’s time Kiss your face in hearts embrace Cover you with lover’s lace To sail the ship of ecstasy Into the eights eternity To deal with me and seek the sun To seal the two and make them one |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Give to you my love in rhyme Endeavor in forever’s time Hiya Sy and a jolly good morning to ya Extremely loving words you have woven here which sooth the heart and mind...convincingly that there is not only hope for romance and relationships of all kinds...but to, for humankind...this whispers what genuine guests we are...here on earth...reaping the glow of poetry...rhyme...and a musical place of caring minds. Thank you! Love to you and yours |
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kaleanna Member
since 2003-08-18
Posts 89TX, USA |
very nice writing Seymour Meesh |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Very romantic write Sy. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very beautiful the contents of this 'letter' Sy! Lovely rhyme and flow in this piece. I'm off and running Christmas shopping... Ah, but I do have time for tea for two!  ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~ Let peace begin with me... |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Lyrical and lovely. Eric |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Thank you sweety, enjoyed your reply. kaleanna Thank you for the nice. scorpio Yes it was,  Nancy, Enjoy the shopping, no tea today.  Eric, Thanks for the lovely. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, dear love sonneteer divine! "I (literally!) sighed each word upon the page" ....   Angel hugs & kisses, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Now that was a sigh I listened for. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
To snip the skins that holds us tight To slip away into the night Greet you by an Eden’s stream Fill the pleasures of a dream ========================= Kiss your face in hearts embrace Cover you with lover’s lace To sail the ship of ecstasy Into the eights eternity To deal with me and seek the sun To seal the two and make them one ==================== To snip the skins that holds us tight *smiling at you* that line will be me way cool winkie line of the day. and could that closing couplet be any cooler?? ... To seal the two and make them one as only you could sweey Sy-guy... as only you could.  I've missed you and Randy...and your winkies.*L*  When I'm with you my eyes are so wide ... |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
sy, you never cease to amaze me, your words just seem to float off the page, the ending of this was simply beautiful! take care, amy  "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, And I missed you more then I'd care to say. WWRS Aimster You are kind. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What beautiful romance you've written, my friend. *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Thank you love. |
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