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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2003-11-23 07:39 PM

SNOWFLAKE

Gently the snow falls,
as I recall,

Every memory,
with every snowflake,

For each is unique,
made of a different
design,

Some melt fast,
some melt before their time,

See how beautiful and white,
Glowing and glisten in the light,

Falling from heaven,
Like angels above,

Holy and pure,
Each wrapped with love,

If I could be a snowflake,
I would fly to you and land
upon your lips,

I would moisten them with my life,
as I melt away,

Sacrificing my life for your joy,
my happiness
to you for a day,

I would glow and glisten,
Shine my love all around,

Bring smiles upon your face,
and take away your frown,

So each time a snowflake will fall,
remember me as you recall,

This little snowflake poem I wrote for you,
To brighten your days of saddness,
and to say I love you too!

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (11-23-2003 08:02 PM).]

Rita 3
Junior Member

since 2003-11-23

Posts 10
Florida

1 posted 2003-11-23 08:12 PM

This is so lovely thanks for sharing...Rita

Family and friend are a blessing always treat them the way you would want them to treat you

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

2 posted 2003-11-23 08:43 PM

nicely written

We do away with your kind...I am war I am pain I am all you've ever slein I am tears in your eyes I am truth I am lies. Dimmu Borgir

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-11-23 08:59 PM

Very nicely penned...and much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2003-11-23 09:32 PM

Beautiful work, RH.

"When your life is tossed and turning
And you are on the raging sea I'll come and pull you from the water Then you will know that you are free" - MWS

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

5 posted 2003-11-23 09:38 PM

Very lovely write.

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

6 posted 2003-11-23 09:47 PM

A very beautiful write.

believe in what your heart feels...

PseudoPoet
Junior Member

since 2003-11-23

Posts 18

7 posted 2003-11-23 09:58 PM

Beautiful!

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

8 posted 2003-11-23 10:56 PM

I'm still here.

An odd thing to say in answer to a poem like this, but on the other hand, not so very odd at all!

But you know what I mean: I... Still here.

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

9 posted 2003-11-23 10:58 PM

lovely -- its snowinghere now (MN) awww its so beautiful...just as this poem

hugssss
Lauren~

I had a dream last night
you came to me on silver wings of light
I flew away with you in painted sky
Was it real
Is it what you see,touch or feel

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

10 posted 2003-11-24 04:45 AM

This poem is just like you my precious heart...beautiful...gentle and kind....it captures through your unique words the essence of love in the winter months....thank you for the perfect words my love...love..

Goldenrose.xxxxxxxxx

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2003-11-24 04:57 AM

just gorgeous...picture and poem

ambrish
Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 257
India

12 posted 2003-11-24 05:09 AM

lovely

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

13 posted 2003-11-24 11:33 AM

Oh, I am so happy that you are making our Dear Goldenrose happy. You two make such beautiful music together!

EA

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

14 posted 2003-11-24 04:56 PM

Lovely...James

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

15 posted 2003-11-24 05:23 PM

So many beautiful images were seen through your words.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

16 posted 2003-11-25 07:05 AM

ARH, this was beautiful and very sincere, your words painted many pictures and each one I enjoyed, thanks for sharing. Take care my friend and be well.

Sincerely
Rick

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

17 posted 2003-11-25 07:56 AM

a heart melting write, the warmth of love
how dear and caring this write.

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