Open Poetry #30 |
If Tomorrow Comes |
ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
What if tomorrow came and went your composed messages were already sent you had a chance to see where the latest invention lead yet you still had no answers as to how certain talents fled... from the face of the earth, before one was conceived before conflicts created skepticism, some of us believed that we had a mission to perform in order to gain special favors that we had habits to reform in order to witness special saviors Existance meant man would strive to place himself in the middle... shall I remind you of Shlomo who contemplated life on his fiddle.. He didn't get very far from his traditional roots he had escaped his town in his well-worn boots searched for a road to reason out his mottled existance but the people he asked wouldn't give him a pittance... He was a simple man in a shtetl village that wtnessed decline his wife prodded him to repair the roof that once reclined... that village became engulfed in a sea of modernization Shlomo wouldn't improve his craft but chose procrastination. He shied away from a tomorrow that already come and went he looked for a message in a message long sent had a chance or two to witness societal changes but was still clueless on the limits of cultural ranges... [This message has been edited by ecrivan (12-04-2003 04:31 PM).] |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well done |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Martin, very much makes your readers think..... which is a good thing!! Hugs Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat write Martin |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Enjoyed Martin, well done. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Brad, Ethyl, Gentle Spirit thanks all for appreciating the effort..did add an extra stanza to fill in a hole in the story |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Never fear Passing Shadows here |
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