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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
15:01 By: Noah Eaton 12/3/03 Deeper you dive Beyond Cousteau Number than Novocaine Reclined upon a weightless pillow Reciprocal relapse The common paedomorphism Why's it so wrong To read the fortune? I don't remember feeling this way today I'm so far in I can't keep track of time I'm realizing somehow this is all familiar Halls of mirrors, anoiting of the sick Unabashed signals Have I gone too far? Did I miss the important part? Have I gone too far? Did I miss the important part? Have I gone too far? Did I miss the important part? Have I gone too far? Where did it all start? Exile never felt So liberating When will come the time When we're finished changing Bright lights shining Like ammonium chloride Take this charlie horse Take this turpentine I don't remember feeling this way today I'm so far in I can't keep track of time I'm realizing somehow this is all familiar Halls of mirrors, anoiting of the sick Unabashed signals Have I gone too far? Did I miss the important part? Have I gone too far? Did I miss the important part? Have I gone too far? Did I miss the important part? Have I gone too far? Where did it all start? . . . . . . . . . . . . . Was I here before? . . . . . . . . . . . . Was I here before? . . . . . . . . . . . Has it been coming back, . Over and over, . and over, . and over . and over, . and over, . . . again... . . . . . I don't remember feeling this way today I'm so far in I can't keep track of time I'm realizing somehow this is all familiar Halls of mirrors, anoiting of the sick Unabashed signals Have I gone too far? Did I miss the important part? Have I gone too far? Did I miss the important part? Have I gone too far? Did I miss the important part? Have I gone too far? Was that the end of the beginning or simply the start? . . . . . . "You'll find something that's enough to keep you But if the bright lights don't receive you You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20 [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (12-03-2003 11:08 PM).] |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Interesting Noah. I like it. :-) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Let us hope that it is the end of the beginning and not the beginning of the end! That was some trip you just took me on!!! lol It was very pleased to see that you posted a poem today! Yeah! Nite, nite!  Linda |
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wintertao Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 366Okaloosa Island, FL |
very nice  |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
You are always on the cutting edge of creativity Noah. Great job! Eric |
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duckysgirl Junior Member
since 2003-11-19
Posts 26Down South |
Noah, I really enjoyed this. You have been blessed with a remarkable talent. Duckysgirl |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
As always buddie, enjoyed it very much. Well done. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesomely written my friend Cold hands means a warm heart |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Very creative and unique, Noah It should be put to music, I think. Great alternative music style lyrics, this. Did you have a song in mind when you wrote it?the only man worth your tears will never make you cry |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
de ja vue! ...oops I went too far and now I have to come back and do it again. Haunting rhythm to this although shouldn't you anoint the sick? Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wow!! That was quite the ride Noah! Much enjoyed this different style you have. Hugs~ ~ Let peace begin with me... |
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