Open Poetry #30 |
Sint Nicolaas verses Santa - repost from last year |
Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Well not quite a repost, because the poem contains 6 little drawings and as we are only allowed to put in 5 nowadays, I'll give you a link to where you may find it. My father, who was an artist, used to make us little books with rhymes and drawings. This one is about the meeting of our Sinterklaas with your Santa on a night, a very dark night. Hope you enjoy the reading. http://lookheretitia.fcpages.com/peek10.html My father was an artist and he used to write and draw little stories for us Sint Nicolaas verses Santa Claus It was on a night a very dark night Three weeks too late he came in sight St. Nicolaas sneeked along the street softly walking on tiptoeing feet It was on a night a very dark night Christmas bells ringing in star's light Santa Claus quietly walking around not aware of the tiptoeing sound And on that night that very dark night A collision!! they bumped real tight Stars and packages flew everwhere Won't tell the curses but they were there Santa shouted 'Why are you here At Christmas I'm in charge you hear" But Sinterklaas who was quite feared Pulled suddenly at Santa's beard And Santa, nobody wondered why, took a swing at Sinterklaas's eye And Sinterklaas? Well he just sighed on that night that very dark night [This message has been edited by Nan (12-04-2003 07:59 PM).] |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
So in the twinkling of the stars you could see this poor man's scars All his packages scattered around took a while before all was found Santa well he choosed for the better and did write to Sinterklaas a letter "Dear St. Nicolaas, my good friend all that is broken will be mend but I will warn you for next year don't dare showing up in my time here" LOL ~Applauds~ That was great xD (Invading KoKo's space to help get the last wonderful graphic in line with the rest... Thanks, KoKo... Happy Holidays [This message has been edited by Nan (12-04-2003 07:58 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TitiaDarling~ EVERYONE needs to follow the link and read this beautiful piece AND see your father's wonderful artwork~ COME ON FOLKS ... whatcha' waiting for !!! It's wonderful, Titia~ *HUGLETS* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(giggles) Hehehe, hey, how come they can't share the holiday giving together, that is kind of selfish for Santa to say that if you ask me, after all, it's the time of giving and sharing! (smiles) This is delightful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Titia, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now that was about the sweetest story I could have read before bedtime - very cute indeed, and the artwork was outstanding! |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
All righty then - Here I am being a buttinsky... This is wonderful, Titia - and if you (or KoKo) isn't happy with my little "assist"... just let me know and I'll undo... |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
I'm okay with it! Can't speak for Titia, but I've no problem at all with it. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
LOL Nan you're a genius, but maybe you could place the two last stanza's underneath the last picture? How come I didn't think of that, using space from Mommy Muys Thanks dear friend, Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent ..I LOVE IT!!! ~ Let peace begin with me... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Titia, I'm so glad that Nan was able to post your Dad's pictures with your poem. I thought for sure that I left a reply before I went to look at your link last night. LOL I just noticed that I didn't!! But, now I have!! I absolutely love this, Titia!! And give Muys a hug for me, too. Ethel |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Thank you for the repost of this delight. *S* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Titia, this is a treasure! |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Delightful, Titia. Definitely getting me into the Christmas spirit! |
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