Her and me ----------> ( Dreams of love )

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Jes
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since 2003-10-21

Posts 422
Denmark

0 posted 2003-12-03 08:59 PM

Eyes that shines so bright ....

With love we freze in delight.

Of our dreams we dream ....

We try to judge our band between.

We feel of our thoughts we think ....

That is what makes our hearts wink.

We are on the way to find eachother ....

Its hard for us to keep silent, with you and me and no other.

My litle shy smile ....

Your smiling eyes, shining out for more than a mile.

Know i will go and rest well ....

For my nightly thoughts of you and mee, my dreams can only tell.

Smile

Jes

This one was first made in danish translated afterwards so can be some tuff sentences to make when you have to translate in the right way and still tell the same story. "" Tell mee what you feel when you read it ""

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

1 posted 2003-12-04 04:49 AM

Sweet, and simply full of heart.

Love,
Terri~

Well I will go down with this ship
And I won't put my hands up and surrender...Dido

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-12-04 04:55 AM

Jes, I like this. It made me think of my sweet Love....
but every love poem I read does. LOL

Hugs

Ethel

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-12-04 05:19 AM

Jes, this is romantic and beautiful

I love it...and you translated just fine

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

4 posted 2003-12-04 06:00 AM

Jes,

beautiful poem of love, and the translation
seems just fine to me, i understood perfectly!
great write.
take care,
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2003-12-04 08:50 AM

Beautiful write from your heart Jes.

Jes
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since 2003-10-21

Posts 422
Denmark

6 posted 2003-12-04 01:06 PM

Thank you all from the bottom of my heart for your thoughts, though today, my heart is full of sorrow cause me and my wife is walking away from eachother with every step we make. But the worst is we both know, but still we have tears to setle.

And thats wery hard so i hope you all, do fine when i dont reply to much theese days.

I have to tell ya all that i have meet another and this poem is for her so its like living in two different worlds right.

Its not because of the new one, mee and my wife walk away but because we have to.

So today this is a smile with a few tears, and i thank you all for replying smile.

Jes

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2003-12-05 12:09 PM

Enjoyed...James

Jes
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since 2003-10-21

Posts 422
Denmark

8 posted 2003-12-05 12:49 PM

Glad you did James

Smile

Jes

ambrish
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since 2003-03-27

Posts 257
India

9 posted 2003-12-05 05:38 AM

My litle shy smile ....

Your smiling eyes, shining out for more than a mile.

Know i will go and rest well ....

For my nightly thoughts of you and mee, my dreams can only tell.

well expressed.language is not a barrier.

Jes
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since 2003-10-21

Posts 422
Denmark

10 posted 2003-12-05 09:05 AM

Smile thanks for ya reply Ambrish.

Smile

Jes

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