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Margot
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0 posted 2003-11-23 06:42 PM



Dance with my pen

When your soul left for the stars
I thought our dance had died
The keening wail, the heartless hole
Your absence left inside

Then I looked up and felt your smile
Whisper of words you impart
I knew with one sweet angel kiss
You found my confused heart

I feel your heart in words I pen
Our souls teach me to write
My faith is strong it leads me on
Traveling to the light

Never again will my soul be lost
It's bathed in the flow of your love
It bring me back to the inner core
Blessed with a light from above

Calling my feet to heed the dance
Lift me on gossamer wings
Calling to me to pen these words
That in my heart do sing

Margot Hill
23Nov03

Love is something eternal, The aspect may change, But not the essence.- Vincent Van Gogh

© Copyright 2003 Margot Hill - All Rights Reserved
lil' Angel
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1 posted 2003-11-23 06:58 PM


What a beautiful poem.
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2003-11-23 07:00 PM


Lovely...so very lovely.
Your pen has a very exquisite touch.
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Varuch Elohim
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3 posted 2003-11-23 07:19 PM


Very beautiful pen.

Varuch

Eloise
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4 posted 2003-11-23 11:05 PM


I agree, this is very lovely indeed.
Margot
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5 posted 2003-11-24 07:24 AM


Thank you all very much

Margot

BloomingRose
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6 posted 2003-11-26 08:45 PM



Absolutely gorgeous!

Deb

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2004-09-04 12:34 PM


A pleasure to read...James
Margot
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8 posted 2004-09-06 09:42 PM


Deb & jamesMichael

Thank you very much

Margot

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