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Open Poetry #30

One to Five (years old)

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2003-12-03 11:06 AM

One Moment in your arms
two Touches of your hand
three Days of endless fright
four Snowflakes in the fall
five Things that got left unsaid

I was young and restless,
as I spent a moment in your arms.
To many times that,
I would cry.

I didn't even know why.
But the touches of your hand,
always soothed my heart.
Let me rest in assurance.

I stand silently,
in days of endless fright.
Clowns scare me in the dead of night,
now everybodies holding me tightly.

sometimes I wonder why?
It is always cold in the winter,
and why sometimes,
there are snowflakes in the fall.

it does not seem right to me,
that you have gone away.
and there are,
so many things left unsaid.

Love,
xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
Graduation : January 29th 2004

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

1 posted 2003-12-03 12:53 PM

kellie-

this is a very thought provoking
piece. i love the quiet intensity
of this! great write.
take care.
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2003-12-03 01:04 PM

Kellie~

This -

'One Moment in your arms
two Touches of your hand
three Days of endless fright
four Snowflakes in the fall
five Things that got left unsaid'

- is classic beauty~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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