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kaleanna
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0 posted 2003-12-03 10:11 AM


Elusive Dreams


fell asleep alone, darkness surrounds her
a warm gentle touch caresses her cheek
soft flutterbye kisses placed gently on her face

the warm embrace surrounding her, she feels so safe
she feels so loved and cared for, yet wait....
what's that sound she hears in the distance?

her eyes not wanting to open, this feels so real....
...........yet is it?
scared that if she opens her eyes this embrace will
                fade
her heart pounding, hoping it's not just a dream

her eyes open slowly as darkness again surrounds her
the distant sound was the alarm clock waking her
               for the day
she sighs...... it was only just a dream

a dream that for now eludes her
but she holds on to the hope that
this "just a dream" fantasy will one day become her
               reality.


Meesh

(thank you again marge for the help with the title for this poem)

[This message has been edited by kaleanna (12-03-2003 10:36 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-12-03 10:30 AM


KaleAnna~

I do have one ... Elusive Dreams~

You nailed it~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
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kaleanna
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2 posted 2003-12-03 10:34 AM


ohhhhhhhhhhh i like that title marge, ty ty ty


hugsssss

Meesh

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3 posted 2003-12-03 12:32 PM


oh yes...very nice writing (and title)
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4 posted 2003-12-04 07:37 AM


ty passsing shadows

Meesh

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