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BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

0 posted 2003-12-02 04:52 PM

~*~

Pluck ever so softly
the harp strings of my heart
carry me away
and sweeten the refrain
allow me to rewrite
the pain of you and I
let me dance upon the wind
drifting through the air
gladden my heart with love
warming up my winter days
so I can remember how to feel
all the beauty that lies within
that I've forgotten how to play.

~*~

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2003-12-02 04:54 PM

well...if you want to play...you know where I am...

M

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2003-12-02 04:59 PM

(sigh) Awwwwwwwww, I hope now that the symphony you sing is free of drama and filled with comedy and joy, sweet friend, look to the child in your heart for the most golden notes, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

3 posted 2003-12-02 05:51 PM

When you want that, truly want it, nobody can stop you. Want it. You deserve it and more.

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steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

4 posted 2003-12-02 05:56 PM

Vivid, powerful imagery. Beautiful poem.

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2003-12-02 06:48 PM

Bluesy Gal,

You write of any topic with grace and inspiration...
This one is a dialogue with self...
Nobody else can...heal ourselves...and love to enth degree.
TD

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2003-12-02 07:06 PM

Maur~ I'm missing that song in my heart, you know the one!!! Hugs girlfriend~

Geeez Noah~ Thank you for your sweet reply,
there's a very pretty poem in there that's so you.

Ed~ So long as I can smile on cue, eh?

I hope you know the difference that you make~
Hugs Big guy~

stevenr~ Thank you so much for the beautiful,
I sure do appreciate it.

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (12-02-2003 07:15 PM).]

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2003-12-02 07:06 PM

enjoyed

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2003-12-02 07:20 PM

Dear Kathleen, thank you for your caring thoughts and understanding all that I am feeling.
You warm my heart in so many ways.

vandana~ Always good to see you here, and thank you.

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

9 posted 2003-12-02 08:00 PM

BluesSerenade - your rainbow is just around the corner, soon Blues, soon...

BC

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

10 posted 2003-12-02 10:50 PM

just temporarily passing thru, the blues, will give way again to the colors of the rainbow, but you already know that

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2003-12-03 02:58 AM

I know

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

12 posted 2003-12-03 08:54 AM

I truly felt this one heart and soul
my friend. you have such a way with
words that touches people all around you!
i wish for you days where you are
surrounded by love and light, and are
free from any pain in your heart! you
truly have a beautiful soul!
take care & hugsssss,

Amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

13 posted 2003-12-03 05:04 PM

Wouldn't it be nice if we could just edit away the tears... and the misjudgments that caused them? *S*

Hugs, my friend... I like this! *S*

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

14 posted 2003-12-04 02:34 AM

Soon, is a long time coming, but I can do this!
Thank you so much BC~

So glad you passed through girlie, make my day would you!!!

I knew that you would, thank you Dixie~

Amy~ You are always so gracious and kind to me...
I wish all that for you too. Thank you, sincerely.

Suthern gal~ There is so much I wish I could take back
and or edit as you say, if only~ (But I know better)
Thank you for your hugs when I needed them most.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

15 posted 2003-12-04 03:47 PM

You have everything it takes to write yourself the perfect heart song! Desire, talent, looks, personality... Write the blues away! ~ mind you, they do make for great reading! lol

When the song returns to your heart ~ and it will ~ it will come when you least expect it and from out of the blue! Be ready! Keep your eyes and heart open! He's a comin' for you!

Loving hugs,
Linda

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

16 posted 2003-12-04 04:28 PM

Aw Bluesy girl,
If you edit out the bad and leave only the good then where is the growth? I really like this. It brings out the romantic in you.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

icequeen
Senior Member

since 2001-12-09

Posts 633
FL USA

17 posted 2003-12-04 08:28 PM

*sigh* me too Blues, me too...

"allow me to rewrite
the pain of you and I"

its lovely, this is. Can I keep a copy?

hugs -
Caroline

the only man worth your tears will never make you cry

EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

18 posted 2003-12-05 06:09 PM

This is a fabulous write, one for the Library. Take care!

"A spring shower was cause to run
Until you twirled me in the rain" ~ BDC

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

19 posted 2003-12-05 06:19 PM

Wonderful write sweet Lori.
Hope things turn around for you soon.
*But then I'd miss you writing the blues...lol*
Hugs YOU!

~ Let peace begin with me...

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

20 posted 2003-12-05 09:32 PM

Lady Linda~ Thank you so much for your warm reply
and your vote of confidence.  My ship, my ship,
where for art thou!  Big hugs to you.

Larry~ That's right, we are living and learning
and growing all the time, no matter what age.
I'm so happy you stopped by and left a reply for me.
Thank you.

Caroline~ So nice of you to say so.
Thanks for that.

EagleOne~

  Every time I see you here I remember the first time.  lol~
You know what I mean by that, don't you?  Thanks and hugs~

Nancy~  Never say die!!
Thanks for always reading my bluesy woozy poetry.
You are such a dear!

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