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Micrometer |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York 
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an illusion, my heart beats violently. just to walk a micrometer with you. just once to hold your hand, I'll disappear from this land. time is in this essense, I want to spend this time with you, without you. I don't know that I could go on. not without you. an illusion, my heart sets down for me. That maybe you could love me to. Its sad to see, the reality, that you don't need me, like I need you. Love, |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Such a sad thing to learn...and a bite too many of us have felt. But you tell it well, which doesn't help much...a little, but not enough. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sad write, I can relate |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
beautiful and sad piece/I think more marriage would last if the love shared was equally felt. thank you for sharing. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
It seems that there is always one in the couple loving more intensely than the other... Lovely write, even though sad. Love, Margherita  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Its sad to see, the reality, that you don't need me, like I need you. You've written this sadness beautifully... love and need are never equal for at any given moment one may love/need more... but a balance is necessary. *S* |
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