Open Poetry #30 |
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This Gent, This Most Humble, Gentle Man |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
There he stood a stately man His step pretty spry His mission to bring the people care Insincere ones need not, to him, apply He, a man of stature, but not vainly proud His hands never for any reason used to bring harm His speech uplifting all, a pillar, most stellar one around Everywhere he went he always drew a crowd Gentle, and kind, a storyteller, a true man of cheer Giving joy wherever he went, of him, none did fear Not an idle man, his time well spent. This lovely, this gentle, this kind, uplifting stellar gent. This gent is you my dear man, the one given to me The one so many years ago given to me by God's plan My dear husband, how could I have ever wanted to set you free? This humble gent, this most gentle man! These are the things I see in you, all of these I carry with pride along with your name. In my eyes you are this gent you love with no disguise. You love me with no shame! Dedicated to my dear husband. A kind, dear, and gentle, humble man that has stood by me with love with no need for disguise. I only wish I could live enough lifetimes to give all he deserves. Blessed I am! |
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Loverlost Member
since 2003-11-25
Posts 89UK |
Wouldn't we all like to have this kind of love and respect shown for us by the lady in our lives. Nice writing.. Love is like Mumps.....the older you are when you catch it....the worse it feels |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
This is lovely...Sylvia Plath wrote her Ode To Ted...I think it is wonderful to write a poem of love to a spouse. Well done, Shara Sparticus Even with insects- |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
What a beautiful tribute. Eric |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Thank you to all of you... ![]() Loverlost--In my dedication it says Blessed I am, now I am going to work toward him being the same. Sparticus-- I appreciate this. I will have to see if I can find this author, and look for her poem. You say it is about her spouse and that means I will probably relate very well with her words. Thanks so much for bringing her to my attention. Eric--One very deserving of so much more. I will work lifetimes to make him proud. God Bless, and thanks again, Terri~ ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Oh Terri...this is a beautfiul tribute...you are a beautiful lady indeed |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Thanks Dixie, hugging you girlie.. ![]() Love, Terri~ ![]() |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Terri, sweet lady, this is so beautiful!! A very loving and tender tribute to your husband, it is. I know that he loves it. ![]() Hugs to you, my friend ![]() Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Yay! Oh Terri, this is such a wonderful dedication to love to your husband, sweet friend, may true happiness forever fill both your hearts and love sing to you always like a music box! (kiss on cheek) I am so happy I'm getting to know you better by e-mail, sweet friend, to know you is to love you more, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Terri, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Rita 3 Junior Member
since 2003-11-23
Posts 10Florida |
SharaRose, This a great poem for your husband he sounds a lot like mine ![]() Family and friend are a blessing always treat them the way you would want them to treat you |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Thanks to all of you.... ![]() Ethel--He liked it alot. He smiled, and said you really make me have a big head. Then he gave me big ol' bear hug. ![]() Noah- Thanks for the music box songs you send for us!! Bless ya bunches! ![]() Rita--Then you know what I mean. You, too are blessed!! What a gem they are. These sweet, gentle men. ![]() Love, Terri~ ![]() |
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