Open Poetry #30 |
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we were once nouns, together |
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Snow![]()
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain ![]() |
![]() we were once nouns, together i thought perhaps i'd give you one more reason to slide over my heart and bleed your self hatred over me into me and yet, you ignore who i was 3 months ago glaring only at what you think i am today yesterday, you stood by my side noun to noun heartbeat to heartache crushing breath to rising anger we were here, together and you called me, lover but i chose silence instead of anger resolution in place of war and because of that, i am invisible snow©2003 "...why does my skeleton pursue me |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
hugsss lady, I know and understand this emotion so well..... ![]() Lauren~ I had a dream last night |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I understand this poem all too well. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
love this... sometimes they just don't want to be peaceful. ![]() All of my impurities are right here on my sleeve. This is Me"---Faith Hill |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
maybe you feel invisible but I see in this you are the bigger person which makes you visible when, and where it counts. I am definately saving this. This is all too familiar....very much so. It's as if you crawled in my skin and told my story. Luckily I am somehow now far removed from that, and I am thanking God EVERY minute of every waking hour for that! Wow, sending many hugs. ![]() Love, Terri~ ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
most times I choose anger and war...I could learn from you |
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