Open Poetry #30 |
Peace |
Pezz1 Junior Member
since 2002-10-27
Posts 33Scotland |
Peace Do you see the pain inside the anguish and hurt the nights that i cried the nights that i wept the tears falling down creating the seas in which sorrows would drown would slip to the depths of blackest despair to linger and thrive to grow through my cares my heart as the ocean your love as the moon i eddy and flow to your every tune one minute i'm calm the next theres no rest my heart pulses madly within this torn chest cast loose as i am set free on the flow i dream of your smile and peace i'm never to know. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome poem here. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Love the rhythm of this, and also the content, well done, Pezz1 ________ice ><> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is sad...I love the sad ones |
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