Open Poetry #30 |
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Just Call Me If You Need Me |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia ![]() |
![]() Picture by Josephine Wall * * * I wrote this for a friend named Lisa who lost her father to cancer four months ago. She is having trouble dealing with her loss and I have offered my shoulder to her as I have been through the same thing and know how difficult it is.I wrote this in the hope that it may help her in the grieving process and I plan to give it to her this week. * * * I have been in your position And I know just how you feel Some days can be a struggle And life can seem so surreal Time can be the greatest healer This I know to be true As I share my own experience Through these words I write for you His spirit will never leave you Remember the good times you had No one can take away the love You still hold for your dear Dad 'tho some days you may feel angry It's so important to release Only then will you find The road to inner peace He will always be around you You might feel him in the breeze He will comfort you in sadness And he may whisper through the trees You may see his reflection In a gently flowing stream Or he may be closest to you When you close your eyes and dream He's still a big part of your life He is the brightest star at night For now and all eternity He will remain your guiding light Hold tightly to your memories For they will help to get you through Just call me if you need me And I will be there for you * * * "We are all angels with only one wing, we can fly only by embracing each other" I am in motion I am blue Love is an ocean I'm anchored in you - Shawn Mullins [This message has been edited by Suetang (12-02-2003 10:22 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Having been through this yourself Sue, allows you to explain and understand the feelings associated with the loss of a father. Very nicely done... Hugs~ ~ Let peace begin with me... |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: A wonderful poem for your friend and I'm sure it will be comforting to her. I lost my dad to cancer many years ago and I miss him all the time. It gets easier to bear as time goes on, but the loss is always there, as you well know! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sue, you are the perfect person for her to lean on. With your kind and understanding heart, I know your friend will be in good hands. This is indeed special. Hugs, Marti 'You cannot shake hands with a clenched fist.' |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sue, Excellent, a lovely write. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Suetang - you are a most caring person, as it shows in this poem to a friend. I'm sure Lisa will appreciate the caring that you have shown and will help... BC |
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allamericanjoe Member
since 2003-10-02
Posts 116Iredell county, NC |
very touching and I hope your friend is doing well. My thoughts are with her. Just the thought of losing my Dad hurts deeply, I hope I have a friend like you to turn to when that day comes. You are a special one! Hug, Hug, Hug!!! JD "The secret of life is enjoying the passage of time" ~James taylor~ |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big angel hugs) And you are just the perfect person to bring her sympathy and comfort, dearest friend, as I know so much how golden your love is for your father and I know through your golden heart Lisa will forever understand how precious her love for her father is and that her father will always guide her from the heavens with loving grace! (angel friendship hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, you are a true comforting spirit to all, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Sue, you are a beautiful friend |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Soothing and healing words. Eric |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, this is such a beautiful poem that you wrote for your friend. I know it will help her with her grief. You have such a loveing heart, sweet lady. ![]() Hugs to you and your friend ![]() Ethel |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sue~ What a compassionately beautiful poet-person you are~ This is lovely and I'm sure will offer your friend much comfort~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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pictureme Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248Ohio, USA |
This brought tears to my eyes yet when I read that you wrote it for a friend and I felt the emotion in it, it was like a sad melody. Your friend is very lucky to have a friend like you. I'm sure the write will mean alot to her! Somehow, it spoke to me and brought also a comfort. Thanks for sharing this. pictureme :-) |
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