Open Poetry #30 |
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Clutching Clouds |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace ![]() |
Clutching Clouds I saw your beauty it flew across the sky caught the wings of my lowest breath and oh how you fly how you fly |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
and oh, how beautifully this write flies across the blue! |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
"caught the wings of my lowest breath"--very pretty and accentuates your title... Much enjoyed. Sadelite |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Beautifully written |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
stunning |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
you soar! |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
You rock! ![]() If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"Clutching Clouds"...perfect Helen...great title *s M |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlick~ You are just a wonderful poetess~ I love the all of this~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
helen - it's been a while, lovely as always... BC |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This literally took my breath away! What a great grouping of words. PS: Thanks for your comment to my first posting. There is so much passion (and talent) on this website, it is rather overwhelming! |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
absolutely captivating poetry - Paul |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
and you do know about flying . . . |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes |
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