Open Poetry #30 |
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Loverlost Member
since 2003-11-25
Posts 89UK ![]() |
As my fingers stretch out reaching for you I feel them glowing with anticipation of that moment when our skin collides and I long for that explosion of tenderness that tumult of whispers that universe of love that smothering of care and as I do touch you that feeling sweeps over me I breathe deep and long then sighing relax into you I am full of you you overwhelm me with your all powerful love I am defenceless against your attack of beauty unwilling to fight against this unstoppable wave of emotion my senses are drowning in a flood of contentment willingly my head so light spins out of control I collapse into your fingertips you hold me I lose all sense of time all of my memories all care for worldly things all worry of this life there is only here now and you Love is like Mumps.....the older you are when you catch it....the worse it feels |
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WildPoet Member
since 2003-11-10
Posts 205California |
That was full of feeling. Very good! WildPoet ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I'll have what you're having! lol I really got into this write! Perhaps a bit too much! lol ![]() ![]() EA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"There is only here, now and you." Like this...James |
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dr_jones Junior Member
since 2003-11-30
Posts 16Michigan |
Sounds like a good thing to be having, can I have some too. Great write I enjoyed it much |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Lots of emotion... Sometimes that's good in a write... Like now ![]() |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
That great escape...being lost in your loves touch. Very nice! Love, Terri~ ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whew! very passionate! |
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Loverlost Member
since 2003-11-25
Posts 89UK |
Thank you all, for your kind replies...I wrote this some time ago. It is good to know that it is appreciated. especially by old friends.. Love is like Mumps.....the older you are when you catch it....the worse it feels [This message has been edited by Loverlost (12-02-2003 08:51 AM).] |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I am closing this post, it can also be found in the MC area, John it would be great if you checked your email.... ![]() Thank you Kindly Greeneyes~Moderator-Open I had a dream last night you came to me on silver wings of light I flew away with you in painted sky Was it real Is it what you see,touch or feel [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (12-02-2003 09:04 AM).] |
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Loverlost Member
since 2003-11-25
Posts 89UK |
Sorry, again, for the problems I caused!!! But thank you again everyone for your replies. Love is like Mumps.....the older you are when you catch it....the worse it feels |
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