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I Profess My Love For You
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I Profess My Love For You |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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 We lay beneath the palms On this balmy Summer's day In a hammock made for two You and I gently sway The sun begins to set A golden orb up in the sky We feel so close to heaven As we watch the world go by I look deep into your eyes As you move your lips to mine In the quiet of the evening How brilliantly love shines The waves are gently lapping At the edge of the shore Your love is like a hidden treasure There's so much yet to explore The seagulls skim the water As the moon comes into view And as the light of day is fading I profess my love for you I am in motion I am blue Love is an ocean I'm anchored in you - Shawn Mullins [This message has been edited by Suetang (11-24-2003 03:48 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Sue..this is so tender and romantic! You write of 'love' so beautifully! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A magical moment! Beautiful romantic words, a memory to cherish. Love, Margherita  |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Sue, I just love to read your poetry. As usual, this is so beautiful. |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Smile Thats what a dane would call romantic Smile Jes |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What a pretty picture my dear... Hope all the beauty envelopes you always. TD |
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Varuch Elohim Junior Member
since 2003-11-10
Posts 41Italy |
Very beautiful ...I can see that you are deeply in love. Thank you for the great read...made my day to see that real love still exist. Varuch Elohim |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very sweet write Sue... seems to suit you ~smiling~ M |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Sue, this was so romantic and the images it portrays is wonderful. Excellent write. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
The perfect time and place.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Beautiful writing Sue..you describe so well your inner most thoughts aligned with the forces of nature that are around you...you invite readers into your world with a polite and gentle manner...thank you for your words... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
Sue, this is touching, and deeply romantic...no surprise, I like! Rf |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I am always so very humbled by all your comments and I thank you so very much. Ed - thanks for telling me about the typo! Take care.......Sue I am in motion I am blue Love is an ocean I'm anchored in you - Shawn Mullins [This message has been edited by Suetang (11-24-2003 04:03 PM).] |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Suetang, this is beautiful. So romantic! Thanks!  Iliana |
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