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Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2003-11-30 09:27 PM

ocean's mouth

my hand, right here
along your side
tangled limbs, within the white
bleached promises, cling
to the sweat on your chest
and my hair, matted ringlets
of your love whispers wrap
'round my shoulders and neck
while in an arch
to kiss the ocean found inside
your lips
oh! salt of you, i crave inside
my desire expounds the
depth and drive
for which we live and focus
crown the touch and taste of
fingers bound
hush now, i've gone no where
my hand, right here
along your side
forever yours
forever mine

snow'03

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2003-11-30 09:45 PM

Very passionate write...
TD

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

2 posted 2003-11-30 10:12 PM

thank you, TD
glad you think so.

snow

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

3 posted 2003-11-30 10:53 PM

I’m not sure I’ve read your work before but I much enjoyed this!

"A spring shower was cause to run
Until you twirled me in the rain" ~ BDC

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-12-01 03:56 AM

I love this!

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

5 posted 2003-12-01 12:56 PM

Keeping this!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2003-12-01 01:09 PM

Wow! I do not think I will ever be able to kiss again without thinking of your passionate words!!!

Earth Angel

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

7 posted 2003-12-01 06:26 PM

Oh dear lord.....how you make one feel....(its all good) Wow Snow....amazing!
Lauren~

I had a dream last night
you came to me on silver wings of light
I flew away with you in painted sky
Was it real
Is it what you see,touch or feel

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