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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2003-11-30 08:11 PM

I pray to find strength in words
as I stare at blank pages
  {in search of something more}
waiting for
emotions to spill
in ink of quill,
and thoughts of rhyme
fading of time...

Flickers of moments
flames of desire
soft warmth of love
in glow of fire

and the scent
of yesterday remains.......

      {Tears no longer fall
       from eyes of pain
       in treasured hold
       cherished memories gained.}

In breeze of winter
I whisper your name
to stars held high
in night of sky
    and the bitter of cold
     could not reach
     to my soul
         still warmed by the knowing of you.

It's better than I could have planned..
it's made me who I am...
{Trace Adkins}

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (11-30-2003 11:54 PM).]

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

1 posted 2003-11-30 08:25 PM

nice write

We do away with your kind...I am war I am pain I am all you've ever slein I am tears in your eyes I am truth I am lies. Dimmu Borgir

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-11-30 08:30 PM

Beautiful, Donna...just beautiful.

Hugs

Ethel

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-11-30 09:03 PM

"In breeze of winter
I whisper your name
to stars held high
in night of sky
    and the bitter of cold
     could not reach
     to my soul
         still warmed by the memories of you."

Beautiful write..straight from your heart to your pen sweet lady.
Hugs~

~ Let peace begin with me...

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

4 posted 2003-11-30 10:58 PM

I am liking this very much!

"A spring shower was cause to run
Until you twirled me in the rain" ~ BDC

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-12-01 03:59 AM

there is warmth from you even when you write about bitter of cold...

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2003-12-01 11:39 AM

thank you all very much and hugssss

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2003-12-01 11:04 PM

(smiles) Yay Oh Donna, I wish for these happy holidays to bring your heart nothing but warmth and comfort, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

8 posted 2003-12-01 11:09 PM

luv you

I had a dream last night
you came to me on silver wings of light
I flew away with you in painted sky
Was it real
Is it what you see,touch or feel

pictureme
Member

since 2003-11-28

Posts 248
Ohio, USA

9 posted 2003-12-01 11:52 PM

This reminded me of "better to have loved and lost than to never have loved at all."
bitterly sweet. Emotion came across and I
wanted to hug you when I finished.
pictureme :-)

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

10 posted 2003-12-01 11:59 PM

Donna...very poignant!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

11 posted 2003-12-02 12:00 PM

Donna, your writing is so genuine, open and honest ~ and as gentle as is your spirit!

Wishing you love and much happiness,
Linda

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