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Open Poetry #30

Pumpernickel

titch k
Member

since 2003-11-25

Posts 123

0 posted 2003-11-30 03:49 PM

Oh go away
my sweet seeded
Pumpernickel;
Then come back,
wearing your
dancing shoes

Look at you
smelling so sweet;
My smooth skinned
Bohemian lover;
Velvet breeches
loosely hanging;
Waistcoat an' all

Loves stimulated
anticipation;
Riding your chariot,
chest puffed;
Flaunting loves
delights

All just to show me
love rides itself,
going full circle
Never to close
its doors !

Titch

PsychoticBunni
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 162
Mythical Atlantis

1 posted 2003-11-30 03:55 PM

wow. seems that you have a weakness for folk dancers. they are kinda cute with their suspenders aren't they? but in all seriousness a great write i like the descripton.

Meg

tragedy is cutting your finger. comedy is falling into an open sewer and dying.
-Mel Brooks

titch k
Member

since 2003-11-25

Posts 123

2 posted 2003-12-01 07:36 AM

love your id SMILE
and your word play
many thanks SMILE
love Titch

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