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Cute is only ...........---->>>>
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
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Cute is only those who cute can be ! You or me ? Smile Jes [This message has been edited by Jes (11-30-2003 12:26 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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Jes, I notice that you use the words "be" and "me" and I wanted to let you know that there is only one "e" in those words, unless you want to write about a "bee" (which is the stinging insect) I know it's hard to learn the English language, but you are doing well, and I enjoy your poetry very much... hugs, Dixie [This message has been edited by passing shadows (11-30-2003 12:24 PM).] |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Thanks dixie i will change that right away smile And thanks for telling, i enjoy your poetry as well. Smile Jes |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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Well done Jes! I am not a teacher, so I usually can't be much help in explaining things, but you are an easy learner... the change looks so much better now!  good job  Keep on writing...I'll always read and enjoy you. |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Smile Thanks for the thumb Jes |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Jes, Cute poem! I enjoyed it. Laura |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Gald ya enjoyed Paris girl Smile Jes |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Jes, I liked the rhythm of this--it's catchy! Sadelite |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Smile Glad ya enjoyed - Sadelite Smile Jes |
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