Open Poetry #30 |
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Romance In Pine |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Quiet eyed advances to pine forest grove A lazy day chances impromptu yellow drove A roadside stop, discussions pause Anticipated drives so high just because Index to lip, a silent sent sign And shadow you, your hand in mine Along a path that we have forged No bickered thorn or briar gorged A prone approach to mercy’s kind Yet spoken clearly heart and mind And through the earth vibrations roar To softer sighs and cries for more Helpless turns unrushed, unheard Into my heart pours forth each word In coming of the cooler chills Whispered on breezes our passion spills Take me seasons full gauntlet prize Fondle my soul in ecstatic wide eyes Bathing in beauty I’ve waited to gaze Whisk me to autumn in its spectacle daze Copyright Kkh 11/23/03 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You have caught the atmosphere wonderfully. Love, Margherita ![]() |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Absolutely fabulous writing here Kathleen. I enjoyed this very much. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
K. you would make a truly great Meteorologist. You can make any season so enjoyable with your words...turning any thought into a sensual masterpiece. |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Wonderful, enjoyed the flow of this piece. SG |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
This captured my imagination, Kathleen. I enjoyed the images and emotions that this write created for me. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ThisDiamond - A little different than what I'm used to reading from your pen. I like it... BC |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
An excellent read, Diamond. |
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