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The day were my thoughts left daily routine ...........
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The day were my thoughts left daily routine ........... |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
It was a simple day of routine ... The day seemed long and never ending. Nowhere, were i looked i saw my normal day ... It came to mee as fast as it went. She is my thoughts and i like her ... But how to change a world, with thoughts within. Hearts will come and go, but why ... But when begins my heart the giggling. The day after tommorrow no she looks so open ... But when will time be time. I want to know, but not when i hurt, or shall I ... I feel like the thief in crime. Its not okay to feel bad and not enjoy or ... I like her smile her eyes her look her soul. Is it mee thats wrong or is it just to be done ... I am really uncertain of my own goal. But her soul ... Is what right know makes me whole. So were is my heart ending ... Thats wery much depending. Smile Jes Hehheheh i really like her. " Smile " [This message has been edited by Jes (11-30-2003 11:17 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Jes An interesting read. |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Smile thanks Seymour, sorry of the spelling, i have went it through, smile Jes |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Jes, it sounds like you're in love...I hope things work out for you and her |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Smile maybe Isnt many poetic words born in the raise of love. Smile I love to bring out what my heart tells. Jes |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
SMILING, je comprends. Her smile has stolen your heart, Jes. No spelling error can cover up that truth.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I think that you are smitten, Jes! This was such a refreshing poem of sweet and innocent love. A beautiful soul connection!   EA |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Yes, Jes...I think it's pretty apparent you like a lot more than her smile! Good luck and thanks for the sweet verse. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Thansk - James Smile yes when i think of her " Sighhh " Thanks for reading Midnitesun. Pure as the heart - thanks Earth Angel Smile yes i guess too smile - Thanks for reading Jaicie Smile Jes |
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