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So Close Apart
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So Close Apart |
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dr_jones Junior Member
since 2003-11-30
Posts 16Michigan |
Each day is a new day full of excitement and dreams... Thoughts of u caress my body Hands so soft and gentle im aroused with passion I close my eyes and feel u here with me So far away, yet so close apart... What keeps me alive beats heavy 4 u It's funny beacause i know you I've known you all my life... and destiny now has brought us together... You make my pulse rise and i know one day we'll see the sun do the same So far away, yet so close apart... Connected through spirit, hope, and love there are no rules So we float parallel in worlds complementing each others beauty For 1 man there shall be 1 woman And the seed of perfection was planted Do you hear when i whisper to you??? So far away, yet so close apart... Each day is a shift in which we work different I'm coming, your going You're working, i'm snoring... I'm eating, you're sleeping I'm tired, you're peaking... If opposites attract then we are truely infactuated with one another So far away, yet so close apart... A warm body, a long hug, and a passionate kiss will someday fill this space between us A day in which desire will know its reality and the truth of the heart will find its home So far away, yet so close apart... [This message has been edited by dr_jones (11-30-2003 07:26 AM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
WELCOME! yes, love's touch can be so close and yet so far apart |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions! Nicely expressed first post. I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ To love and be loved |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Welcome to the Passions family...we are glad you are here....this is a softly sensual piece... please check your email for a special greeting Kindly Greeneyes~ I had a dream last night |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Awwww, heart words shared, but seem meant for that private pillow talk time...How sweet is this!!!!!!! Gentle, and tender as can be. Lovely! A kiss for you and your love.  Love, Terri~  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sounds like you're in love... Welcome to Passions  Looking forward to more writings! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Do you hear when i whisper to you??? So far away, yet so close apart... I can definitely relate. *S* Welcome to Passions... I enjoyed this first post very much! *S* |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I really enjoyed this first post and look forward to more from you. Welcome to Passions.  Hugs Ethel |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Welcome to Passions and thank you for sharing your words with us. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You have expressed the "So Close Apart" scenario so very well! May the time soon come when you may greet the dawning light together!  Hi, and welcome to Passions! I do believe that you are going to enjoy this poetic home away from home! I have enjoyed your first post! Warm, welcoming hugs, Earth Angel |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to Passions. An excellent entrance. ThisDiamond |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
The concept of quality in poetry is alive and well! Glad you're here.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
 Enjoyed your first post!! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
   (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I know this feeling ever so well of yearning, sweet friend, know soon you are destined to be in loves arms forever, this is a gorgeous debut! Welcome to Passions, sweet Del, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Pammy, we all love you so much, and...Happy Thanksgiving to you and all your loved ones! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
beautiful poem! your heart shines in this, and your words are simply wonderful! Welcome to Passions! take care. Amy  "love is like a butterfly-- |
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