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Open Poetry #30

Of Vespertine...

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2003-11-23 02:13 PM

Left behind the city’s din,
At commence of eve’s begin,
That special time when day and night,
Are at repose, with equal might
In consonance, without day’s anger,
Not yet the dull of midnight’s languor,
It is the time of eventide,
When day and night lie side by side,
And in the gloaming join as one,
To glorify a day now done
To sanctify a night to come,
Vespertine, night’s ascension in day’s succumb.

[This message has been edited by Tim (11-23-2003 02:19 PM).]

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2003-11-23 02:24 PM

Tim
Well done, enjoyed the read.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2003-11-23 03:44 PM

This really makes me live the moment ... for me a little bit melancholic, but nonetheless holding true magic.
Beautiful.
Margherita

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2003-11-23 03:52 PM

Oh, so pretty. You have captured this defining moment with perfect colors.
TD

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2003-11-23 07:31 PM

Yes, that particular moment is most
enjoyable. Sitting on a calm lake's waters,
watching the last of a setting sun fall into
the horizon... Pure Heaven!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2003-11-23 07:56 PM

You ready for tomorrow
very well, indeed.

Lovely, Sir, very lovely.

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