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the challenges of the ocean |
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Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain 
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hey!, i found this in the challenge forum and i know its already been done (by me) but i haven't written in forever and i really needed something. so yea...its not awesome or anything to be proud of...but hey! it's something I am the tears that fall and the smile behind them I wonder if the stars are to numerous I hear your silence weeping before me I see all the wonders you haven't achieved I want to be in your arms one last time I am the tears that fall and the smile behind them I pretend that nothing has ever hurt me I feel like the worlds don't want to close in I touch feathery wings of my guardian angel I worry that time will never grant me my wish I cry for every time I thought I had you I am the tears that fall and the smile behind them I understand simpicity can sometimes be to great I say that everything exsists for a purpose I dream of all the things I can't ever have I try to not fall down into the grasps of life I hope someday life will return to its rituals I am the tears that fall and the smile behind them * the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes * |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I think, in a way, at one time or another, that all of us are like what you've described here in this poem...I can see myself well. Thank you for sharing. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I am the tears that fall and the smile behind them I enjoyed your poem, it's beautiful. Love, Margherita |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
passing shadows-i thank you for your reply and take it as a compliment...that you can see yourself in this piece as well....a lot of this is infact...a very big part of me. thank you for taking the time to reply. Margherita- thank you for your kind words...they do mean a lot..i am so glad you enjoyed this piece. **ri * the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes * |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
...and "I" like you! It was nice to get to know you better! ~ and good to see you posting again! Warm, welcome-back hugs, EA |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
thank you EA!!!!! i am so glad to be back! i couldn't be happier to at least be writing something again...sigh...  glad you enjoyed ri * the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes * |
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