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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
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I thought that I would try something different for those who know my writing. Let me know what you think, if you have a chance. Thanks poe. It was just another__day as usual waking, without a clue after those eight hours my coffee__black as usual, I stare__ at that weary reflection from the surface of this a.m drink, wondering__ how long this time, my thoughts will begin to deliver, the days intro again, as usual without notice of the weather some things__ are just going to do what they want, as usual I dine myself last this self induced offering So I can stay__but I can’t As usual, And off I go, un-noticed for another day. Till comes the time those eight hours like I do__everyday which by the way I look forward too as usual for the next day. If nothing is something then everything is our thoughts and feelings and all that exists. [This message has been edited by mysticpoe (11-29-2003 11:55 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MysticPoe~ I know that I like it~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Thanks Marge, to tell you the truth. I'm not crazy about the poem. But, I really appreciate you taking the time to comment. Thanks again. poe |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I like it...it's different I can relate to what you write about....pretty neat |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
passing shadows, I really appreciate you taking the time. Thanks a ton, to you and Marge. Maybe I can go other places. Thank you, poe If nothing is something |
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