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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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~~**~~ Alacia Grace  ~~**~~ She comes to me taps my shoulder with soft fingers "mommy I can't sleep" "why?" "I don't know" I pick her up; gently lay her back down caress her forehead until eyes close my eyes swell with tears and I am reminded there is beauty in the world I had a dream last night you came to me on silver wings of light I flew away with you in painted sky Was it real Is it what you see,touch or feel [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (11-29-2003 07:03 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
No question about it...nothing more special than the warmth and security of a loving parent who spends that special moment in comfort.... Thanx Lauren, reminds me of a few years ago... |
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Lotus Breeze Member
since 2003-09-06
Posts 112 |
You make eyes tear in missing a caress, enjoy very much your poem |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
"there is beauty in the world" and i can only say thank you for sharing it with us. snow "...why does my skeleton pursue me |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
No question you possess the most up close look at the beauty of the world. All Blessings To You, TD |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Oh Lauren, this is beautiful, sweet friend, you are a very loving friend and parent and you are what brought her that rewarding smile in her picture, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
This one brought back some memories, and found me a rare smile! Thank you,  "A spring shower was cause to run |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is nice...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
precious, just precious |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
I really loved your poem. It made me think about a few things! It was exquizit! Good Job! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Adorable...I love this! Hugs YOU! ~ Let peace begin with me... |
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Loverlost Member
since 2003-11-25
Posts 89UK |
Beautiful beautiful! Thank you for reminding me. x Love is like Mumps.....the older you are when you catch it....the worse it feels |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Lauren- such a beautiful write...the feelings just jump off the page...you show your heart both brilliantly and honestly here. hugs, Amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and to me, "she"is what life is all about Terrifically insightful write and read...beautifully profound with a giant message to all who read |
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Pezz1 Junior Member
since 2002-10-27
Posts 33Scotland |
Very beautiful work, thank you for sharing x x |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
yes there is, and you have gifted this to her dear friend....just lovely you....and your love... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
And that beauty is standing right there before your eyes!!! She is absolutely adorable and so precious Lauren. Thank you for sharing the moment! Hugs~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
There is indeed. *S* She's a doll... and your love shines through your words... both are beautiful. *S* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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Antonio_L Member
since 2003-12-01
Posts 110NorthEast USA |
This is very special Lauren, so gentle. You shared your feelings beautifully. Tony. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
quote: let's never forget that. . . wonderfully done. . . -------------------------------------------------------- I am tired . . . |
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pictureme Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248Ohio, USA |
What a beautiful child...with a beautiful mommy. There is beauty in the world! I've always adored the quote "A baby is God's way of saying the world should go on" (author unknown). thanks for sharing this! pictureme :-) |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Awww Lauren this is beautiful. ~Kelly~ Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What can I say? Oh, yes.  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Greeneyes, lady..... wow, did you bring back memories of some of my toughest days....it was my little girl, way back then, who always gave me a different take on things. lol |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Lauren, I don't know how I missed this the first time around, but I am sooooo glad that I didn't miss it this second time!! This is the most tender and loving write. Thank you so much for sharing this special moment!!  Hugs to you and your little one,  Ethel |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Oh yes, there is beauty in this world and it comes in the smallest packages in little moments...and there she is! She's beautiful! My little girl (four years old) will appreciate your words and the picture of your little girl, so I am saving this one for her return from her dad's house. A lovely write! Patricia |
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Steve Motuel Member
since 2003-12-19
Posts 72Bergen auf Ruegen, Germany |
the wonder of a childs smile, the beauty in the words that remind us... Steve |
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