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lonely driveway |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN 
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Lonely Driveway I flew back as quickly as i could, burning the air just to get to your house on time and make you happy for once i was minutes late, breaking the limit of your grace period i try and converse and make it seem alright, but responses come like inmates to their , none want to willingly visit me noise permeates the air, but my vocals are not among them, your rejection to me is worse than floggings for innocence When will you make time for me? i walk towards you and you run im searching for the things to say but when i remember, the thought slips away i see you outside and persue you with vigor a shadow passes over me, your protector has arrived he drives me away without force all he does is touch your hand and hold your arm this reminder is enough to stay my tongue it strikes fear in my heart so i leave, slipping away unnoticed you dont care, your lord protector is there keeping watch over you, saving you from the courtiers, the pushing crowd. maybe the crowd is one, consisting of me, so i do leave, hiding a tear of hurt the party continues without me i trudge down the lonely driveway and return.....home now im alone, but not lonely like before |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Very interesting read. I like it |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I have read a few of yours in teen, you are tooo young to feel this way....this is very touching on many different levels..... Lauren~ I had a dream last night |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
i agree with me being too young to feel this, but yet i do....anyway this was a really old poem from me...thanks for commenting -alex now im alone, but not lonely like before |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Sounds like a very hurtful place to be in your emotions. Hope it's better now.  Love, Terri~  [This message has been edited by SharaRose (11-29-2003 02:49 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very sad  |
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