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Open Poetry #30

The Moon Rising

titch k
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since 2003-11-25

Posts 123

0 posted 2003-11-28 08:08 PM

Oh tender spirit
Will you, bed down with me;
Should, unkindness
saunter; Heeded not?
I cannot imagine,
of Broad-bosomed Earth;
Spring without Autumn;
I've had my troubles,
as brooding dove;
A child of darkness,
grey springtime;
And the rainy time of year;

Every labouring sinew,
and happiness too swiftly flies
Yet so mistaken, on Earth,
scattering unbeholden;
Concerning, what had I to do?
Greet the unseen with a cheer
Oh my mind, and in the midst
of tears; Impetuous one, will
thou take a deep Autumnal tone
Like an unbodied one, whose
joy, hath just begun

Who among vipers, can revel,
where lovers meet;
Forgiveness, filling the hills,
the assuring desire; Amidst
that which own heart suffers;
As I've described;
Of gossiper's in Winter,
let us straighten a twisted tongue
Held prisoned, in a law,
without beginning or end
Creating, changing, all hushed;
The moon rising,
in love-happiness and peace!

Titch

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©Titch K 2003

~ Love Will Serenade You - Even When The Lights of Time, Cease To Shine

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

1 posted 2003-11-29 10:54 AM

Beautiful.

Eric

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2003-11-29 11:26 AM

Deep and heartfelt.
Enjoyed reading this ... in the end PEACE.
Love and Light. Margherita

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-11-29 12:55 PM

I enjoyed this, and loved the ending

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

4 posted 2003-11-29 01:07 PM

Bravo! excellent poetry....enjoyed reading this poem.....:-)

"Oh my mind, and in the midst
of tears; Impetuous one, will
thou take a deep Autumnal tone
Like an unbodied one, whose
joy, hath just begun"

very nice...:-) and also here>

"Of gossiper's in Winter,
let us straighten a twisted tongue
Held prisoned, in a law,
without beginning or end"

_________ice
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