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As You Became My Dreams (Poem Correction )
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As You Became My Dreams (Poem Correction ) |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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As You Became My reams You planted those seeds Until they grew and grew Cherished within my mind Are those thoughts of you On a bright summers day I stroll along by the shore You are there on my mind In thoughts more and more As the sunset descended Glowing red upon the sea Always colouring my mind Thoughts had grown in me While stars gather around Where moonlight streams You appeared on my mind As you became my dreams Hope©2004 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dreams are funny things one becomes another's dream and then it doesn't work out, then another dream must be found but meanwhile, the person is left dreamless....I know how this feels...dream on... but have a back-up  |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks dixie , yes I am a dreamer !! by the way , my back up is smoring right now LOL Hope |
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