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choshi
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0 posted 2004-01-24 10:19 AM




Settling,
the freshly fallen snow;
winter night.


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1 posted 2004-01-24 10:45 AM


shoveling
fluffy remainders
day after

Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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2 posted 2004-01-24 01:29 PM


approaching
noon warmth tidal melt
snow puddles

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3 posted 2004-01-24 01:31 PM


excellent.
richard

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4 posted 2004-01-24 01:32 PM


beautiful
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5 posted 2004-01-24 03:12 PM


CHICKEN SOUP, MELTING MARSHMALLOWS ON TOP OF WARM COCOA, FUZZY SLIPPER SOCKS WITH THE STICKY DOTS ON THE BOTTOM AND A BIG, FLUFFY, PLAID THROW IN FRONT OF A FIREPLACE...

though you could use some warm images!

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6 posted 2004-01-24 03:57 PM




(smiles) Yay I love this, dearest friend, may this be a winter wonderland for you and all your loved ones, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paul, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

choshi
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7 posted 2004-01-24 07:09 PM


From Muted:


approaching
noon warmth tidal melt
snow puddles

Rainbows
light the snow puddles,
noon melt.



choshi
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8 posted 2004-01-24 07:12 PM


From Michelle:

shoveling
fluffy remainders
day after

Clearing sky;
windows frosted over
after the storm.


choshi
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9 posted 2004-01-24 07:13 PM


excellent.
richard


Thank you Richard nice to be meeting you ~C

choshi
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10 posted 2004-01-24 07:13 PM


beautiful


Aww Thank you Dixie....~C

choshi
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11 posted 2004-01-24 07:15 PM


CHICKEN SOUP, MELTING MARSHMALLOWS ON TOP OF WARM COCOA, FUZZY SLIPPER SOCKS WITH THE STICKY DOTS ON THE BOTTOM AND A BIG, FLUFFY, PLAID THROW IN FRONT OF A FIREPLACE...

though you could use some warm images!

McLean

Certainly winter....   ~C

choshi
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12 posted 2004-01-24 07:16 PM


From Noah: thank you for sharing!

Thank you for your warmth   ~C

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