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exhale
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0 posted 2004-01-24 01:19 AM


the sun is going down
but i don't want this day to end
i don't want to leave your side
your chest rises and falls
the sound of your heartbeat
is like a lullabye
music to my ears
music to my soul
put your arms around me
and lets make this amazing
this could last a lifetime..

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Voiceless
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Under the stars upon the wind
1 posted 2004-01-24 01:42 AM


Beautiful, I wouldn't want to leave either.
Great job!

~Jen

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

Michelle_loves_Mike
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2 posted 2004-01-24 10:29 AM


wonderfully written
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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