Open Poetry #30 |
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The Time Of Your Life |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Time is such a mystery, The days seem very long The years fly bye, they're history, Too soon they've come and gone. Grasp each hour with passion, Each minute should be cherished, Quickly our life passes, All but memories perish. Take advantage of your dreams, Make all you can come true, No matter how long it seems, The years are very few. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Toe, An excellent write, do you have a new influence in your life? LOL |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Toe, thanx for a very genuine poem, that shows me a part of you we seldom get to glimpse.... I relate very well to this poem....very much. |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Toe, this is a very well-written poem from your heart. Very sincere. I'm sorry that I just now saw it. I'm keeping this one, my friend. ![]() Hugs ![]() Ethel |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
A beautiful thoughtful poem Toe. And it's all too true. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Toe, this moves me more than I am able to express ~ as you well know. You are so much more than just a pretty face! Through your writing you are able to connect with peoples' minds, hearts, and spirits! ~ as well with their bones of funny. This was a heart to heart poem, and it was very meaningful and special. ![]() Love you, Dear SBT! EA |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetToeMan~ How'd you get so wise ? ![]() This is beautifully true~ Love ya' man~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
As I spend this weekend trying to cherish every moment, keeping the looming drought of "without" at bay a few more days... this moves me to tears. Beautiful write, my friend... |
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Lotus Breeze Member
since 2003-09-06
Posts 112 |
I enjoyed this very much, make me cherish time |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
So very true, Sir Toe! ![]() |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Psychological thought from the toeman....scary...and yet true as it can be. Sometimes being reminded of our own mortality can make us see things in new ways. Nice words, Scott.. ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Toe, I am falling for this serious side of you...it looks good on you |
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the ant Junior Member
since 2003-11-30
Posts 18ca, usa |
I can see why so many replied so quickly. Its a great poem. thanks for sharing. .ant. |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Toerag... Thank you for such a lovely verse. Makes me want to embrace the "now" even more than I already do. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Just an awesome message and great work to give it ![]() |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"These are the good ole days" from the luscious miss Carly Simon. Hugs to you toe. |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
That is an awesoe poem, and so true. We really should enjoy what time we are given, especially when we are young! Good job!! We never know what we have until it is gone. Great poem!! |
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WildPoet Member
since 2003-11-10
Posts 205California |
I like your style! ![]() WildPoet ![]() |
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Kaoru![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Ain't that the truth.. Great write. |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
I realised today how true this is when my sister and her boys came to visit. I can't believe how quickly they're growing! Great write! B ![]() "I'm not crazy I'm just a little unwell"~ Matchbox 20 |
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Daniel Michael New Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 4Rochester Hills, Michigan |
Hi Toe, I'm new here. What an uplifting poem. I have been reading various poems and noticed a lot of them are negative or downbeat. Keep up the good work. Dan |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
So true....thank you for sharing your wise thoughts. Charisma |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
What a wonderful write from you dear Toeman. How true ..the years fly by faster the older we get. Life is merely a blink of the eye. Love this style...it looks good on you. ![]() Hugs~ ~ To love and be loved |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Hard to answer this one, Brother Toe.... I like what I see, and in some ways I don't.... Like life, I'll go with the good. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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