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We Walk With Love
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We Walk With Love |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Foolish ambiguous silence reflects a resolute gloss Integrating beyond, coining mystic transforms Free-spirit dripping cavalcades into ambiance Penetrating trees epithet weaving monotonous Regardless how many stubborn winds strip each leaf They dream technique Awakening a stronger desire for the opening heart As the world dreams serenity Massive wings of accord painting collective & hardy Through windows of images beyond gently floating Divine life currents gush likewise symbolically Stepping into this poignant threshold Chanting among wood wind sounds of light Offering mainstay fresh, new, and breathing Heartbeat collaborating seeing the might Training verbal communication Into the other world, so mutual, so intensely intimate A wide initial impulse uncurls, I float into arms Hearing voice inwardly, familiar slow burning of passion Brings startling imaginative depth unseen verbal powers Probability leaps into enormous hues Uplifting an essence of inner mountain streams Rippling a light & sound of effects, joining discussions Golden heart absorbing thoughts in this unending being Friendly nudges vivid, describing incomprehensible My mind walks with great clarity, fully cognizant and uninfluenced Turning around to wave to my room feeling the panoramic pull Somehow a waking state, beams me into childhood Where nothing squabbles, but fertilizes this voyage Becoming an internal part of milliseconds Intrusive thought expires in a puff of mist, turning warm, reliant Cooperative, where a neural pathway opens wide My immune system becomes vulnerable to this exposure Building me full-bodied with the ego of an newscaster There is great work waiting for my hands to mold Active the quest, focused beyond control I recall this stimulate, drinking eagerly like a thirst torn voice An enhancement of which journeys beyond tomorrow Sea life increases toward the astral planes Timeless insights, dreams and phenomenon Becomes my soul throughout a fascinating command Rising to a penthouse, a strange city opening Where a holiday lifts my glass to toast Revealing me to the ears of youth A garden hands me a good place to still Where I hear motif voices of whales Feeling very warm, all stars move in symmetry To 10 times any size of concentration A secret place, yet unhidden with the glow of the sun My shadow drains, circumventing colorful spores I reach out…missing children speak Forever listens….reasonably happy Content within this marriage Crowns weed self delusion, flowering another birth One so trusting, desirable, permanent I fold up my life, neatly, carefully handing it over Empowered by hybrid concrete, entangling an infinite look Returning to my native land This beauty is soft…absorbing, and the center of all things |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
this is one of my favorites of yours, Lee. Especially this part..... They dream technique Awakening a stronger desire for the opening heart As the world dreams serenity Just beautiful writing, lady.  Hugs, Ethle |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
beautiful piece |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Good morning Alice in wonderland. I enjoyed the trip.  |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
LeeJ Your use of language is awesome, I must admit, I must read slow, like sipping good wine that bursts on the tasetbuds, poems like this need be taken slow in order to intoxicate the brain properly. Your style of writing reminds me of Kerouac and Ginsberg....long beautiful sentances without much punctuation, poems that leave the reader breathless... enjoyed this poem.....:-) _______ice ><> |
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