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Open Poetry #30

Flying High Above Clouds

Laoha
Member

since 2003-03-07

Posts 161
Nevada, USA

0 posted 2004-01-23 11:10 AM

Two swans flying
high above the clouds.

Nobody told me
that the truth seeking is
so lonely
and so long.

Lucky,
I have you by my side
to remind me
from time to time
that you are not
the only one with me.

Besides you,
there is the glory of the sun.

1/19/2004

Laoha's Pen

Chinapoet

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

1 posted 2004-01-23 11:17 AM

breathtaking

~*~

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

2 posted 2004-01-23 11:29 AM

"Nobody told me
that the truth seeking is
so lonely
and so long."

Much wisdom here...lovely write.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-01-23 12:43 PM

beautiful

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2004-01-24 04:32 AM

Beautiful write about wise and wonderful awareness.
Enjoyed this very much.
Love, Margherita

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

5 posted 2004-01-24 05:43 AM

Laoha this has.....moved me greatly.

Simple, clear, direct and aching - the kind of poetry I respond to the most.

Glory of the sun is a bit of a cliche but honestly? I think it works here...very well indeed...proof that cliches are not always dead ends after all..

fantastic, very glad I found it.

nn
Member

since 2000-09-18

Posts 75

6 posted 2004-01-24 08:33 AM

Very beautiful

Laoha
Member

since 2003-03-07

Posts 161
Nevada, USA

7 posted 2004-01-25 02:26 AM

There is a piture to go with this poem which I wish I could upload it here.

I enjoyed it while I wrote it.

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